Bullz-Eye.com - Writing Personal Ads That Get Women

Does your personal ad sound something like this: "Hi Ladies. I am an active guy looking for a lady that has similar interests. I love dining, dancing in clubs, movies, concerts, taking walks or just spending time at home relaxing by the pool." If it does sound like this, take it down now! Here's Part II of the WeeklyScore.com's exclusive three-part series on how to write effective personal ads that'll get the attention of a lot of women.

In the past six months, I've talked to hundreds of guys who've posted personal ads on sites like Match.com or Yahoo Personals, and I can't tell you how many times some poor chap has come to me with, "Jack, I've had an ad on Match.com for six months, and I haven't received a single reply from a woman."

I know that's frustrating, especially considering how many women are on these sites looking for a man to meet.

Well, if you follow my techniques for writing personal ads, getting women to respond shouldn't be a problem.

Now, in last week's section on writing effective personal ads, I showed you the first part of your personal ad -- the headline. And I showed you how to write a headline that's unique so that you immediately get the attention of a lot of women.

Today, I'm going to show you the next step of your personal ad -- how to keep her interested with an ultra-specific personal profile.

But before I show you how to write a better personal profile, let me show you what NOT to do.

This is an actual personal ad I found while doing a search on one of the most popular dating sites in one of the largest cities in the U.S. It was the very first ad that popped up when I did my search�so this is exactly what women see when they do a search on the same site in the same city.

"Headline: Do nice guys always finish last?

They say nice guys finish last, I'm hoping it's not always true. I recently moved back to XXXXXX. I would love to make some friends to go out and enjoy the city and have some fun. If more comes of it that would be great. Kind of shy at first but trying to get over that. I love the resturants and the lake front. Going out for dinner and a movie or listen to a band. I also love a nice quiet evening in. "

I've talked to this guy to see how his personal ad was performing, and my suspicions were confirmed. He hasn't received a single reply.

Now remember, a personal ad I posted in September received 23 replies in one week! So all is not lost. You can definitely stack the deck in your favor by following my 3-U method for writing personal ads.

Here we go�.

The Personal Profile (Ultra-Specific)

I'm sure you've heard the phrase, "The devil is in the detail."

Well, not only is the devil in the detail, but the detail will help you get women.
What most women want, what they dream about, is going on an adventure or going on an exciting journey with Prince Charming.

And that's what you have to do. You literally have to take her on a journey with your personal ad. This will excite her�this will entice her�and it will show her that you're not the typical, boring guy.

It also separates you from the pack. Like I said in the first part of this series, take a look at about 20 personal ads posted by men. The one thing that stands out is that they all sound the same.

That's exactly what you don't want. You want to be different.

For example, which do you think women will more likely respond to:

"I like to do anything fun like shoot pool, roller blade, camp, hike, travel, road trips, or go to bars with a couple good friends."

Or...

"I'm usually on the run on the weekends. Last week I visited Annapolis (home of the U.S. Naval Academy). There was an English garden on the grounds at the Academy that rivaled anything I've seen in London. But I have to admit -- the garden notwithstanding, the outdoor caf�s overlooking the Chesapeake Bay was the highlight of my daytrip. Simply stunning. Next week I'm heading to D.C. to see the Cherry Blossoms (if you haven't seen them in full bloom, you should). After that, I'll hit this French caf� that sits above the Potomac River. It comes highly recommended."

I think it's obvious. The latter is better.

I mean, anyone can say, "I like to do anything fun." But in the latter, you separate yourself from the pack by teasing her senses with details. And you've left the door open for a possible date (heading to D.C. to see the Cherry Blossoms). This is known as the close.

I'll tell you how to do that on April 14 in the third and final part of this series. But if you want to get started right now, you can get a copy of my Guaranteed to Get a Date Guide.

The Guaranteed to Get a Date Guide is a concise report full of information you can use right now.

In the Guaranteed to Get a Date Guide, I give you four sample personal ads that have been tested and proven to work, including the exact ad that got me 23 women in seven days. In addition to four personal ads, I also give you 15 headlines.

Talk to you soon�and happy scoring,

Jack Conway

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